Re: Alone but not Abandoned -- ARTISTRY IN POETRY

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Date Posted: 10:15:11 01/28/08 Mon
Author: Freddie
Subject: Re: Alone but not Abandoned
In reply to: Callighan 's message, "Re: Alone but not Abandoned" on 02:12:23 01/27/08 Sun

>I'm seeing a logical gap here. A jumpy narrative
>towards the end. A narrative is missing between "I
>release my anger" to "silence", "he listens".
>I agree with the ending, but I feel such an emotional
>jump towards it.

I don’t feel anything missing. God is always listening & caring but she had to remember that herself in order to feel peace.

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>>I'm seeing a logical gap here. A jumpy narrative >>towards the end. A narrative is missing between "I >>release my anger" to "silence", "he listens". >>I agree with the ending, but I feel such an emotional >>jump towards it. > > >I don’t feel anything missing. God is always listening >& caring but she had to remember that herself in order >to feel peace.
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