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Date Posted: 00:02:41 01/14/09 Wed
Author: Wayne Adams
Subject: Re: Poppies~~
In reply to: Tirzah Fujii 's message, "Poppies~~" on 23:57:39 01/13/09 Tue

>Fields of crimson poppies
>undulating-hypnotic-dancing
>blazing waves of light, warmed our eyes
>'til our minds caught fire
>cocooned by seductive whispers
>our bodies, hushed into faint echoes
>weaving thread upon thread
>or labryinth upon labryinth
>dreams between,into,onto reality
>bright folding molded petals
>and you and I-softly melted
>lulled by a tender lilting
>willingly into the blooming fire


This is a poem that seems (to me at least) be a warning to
people easily tempted. Am I wrong or right?

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  • Re: Poppies~~ -- Tirzah Fujii, 12:28:34 01/15/09 Thu

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