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Date Posted: 23:49:38 05/02/09 Sat
Author: Joyce
Subject: Re: Please help me, I can't swim
In reply to: Callighan 's message, "Please help me, I can't swim" on 16:04:03 04/28/09 Tue

Definitely a psychodelic dream!! I like the images and their changing from verse to verse--it enhances the feel of a dreamworld. Well done!!



A note at 2 am in the morning;
>"I'm leaving myself to chance"
>
>I know I'm alone in the world
>Nobody knows me
>Not a soul
>Not mine
>
>Even friends are aliens
>
>
>~This space is reserved for dreams~
>Dreams, that begin at the expense of the previous
>
>It is true
>
>The dream is true
>
>The dream is due
>
>..gelap, gelap, lelap
>
>
>I find myself estranged in a cloud
>Losing patience and will at the same time
>Yet my most dominant sense survives
>My sense of curiosity
>
>Curiosity, my pussy
>My undeterred, unsheathed,
>Pussy
>
>pusatkan dirimu padaku
>
>Because I love you
>
>As I am you
>
>You,
>and my dream
>
>Yes,
>I'm dreaming of me
>As me, as you
>As the flowers and clouds
>
>Then I see me,
>Meeting Ms. Grammar
>A miss most missus
>Amiss, her thistles
>Thisling her whistles
>
>And whistling her wishes
>
>Some wish I share
>And some I actually bear
>
>Then I see me
>Looking down the table
>And a slit
>A slit of a skirt
>A hint of a bird
>It seems a bird in a skirt
>
>A pale, blue bird
>Nesting its herd
>in a skirt
>
>Then I look up
>And I see a uniform
>A unicorn in uniform
>With long white hair
>And beautiful eyes
>
>At first, she glances
>Then she dances
>
>And then I join her
>
>So we dance
>And we shall dance
>and dance,
>and prance
>into a trance
>
>A trance of transverses
>Traversing travesties
>Travesties traverse me
>They verse me adversities
>And adverts, artworks
>Artsy breezy, travesties of adverse me
>
>And then in a whirl
>
>I faint..
>
>
>Dawn breaks,
>The night departs into the sunder
>I say goodbye to haven
>My respite from common sorrows
>
>Now off to dawn and daybreak
>My breaks, mistakes and heartshakes
>
>Oh my bads, plus heartbreaks
>
>
>Then I find myself
>Talking to the wall
>A wall of appalling gall,
>plus bitterness and droll
>
>He's a round-faced wall
>A kind wall
>Which inverses
>What I've versed
>In the previous verse
>
>How redundant!
>
>So the wall said;
>"Let's be tall!"
>
>And so I become
>A short person
>With a tall heart
>
>Which means,
>it's bottom is a long way down
>
>down
>
>down
>
>~drown~
>
>Please help me, I can't swim

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