Re: The Sun Danced -- ARTISTRY IN POETRY

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Date Posted: 14:21:10 03/06/06 Mon
Author: laugh N tears
Subject: Re: The Sun Danced
In reply to: Wayne Adams 's message, "The Sun Danced" on 23:55:26 02/04/06 Sat

>On a clear winter day
>When the sun was thinking
>Of its evening nap
>I saw the sun ( or, it's light?) dancing upon a fence.
>In the slowness of winter's (or, a white freeze?)grasp
>The sun decided
>To entertain us.

Nice work.

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>>On a clear winter day >>When the sun was thinking >>Of its evening nap >>I saw the sun ( or, it's light?) dancing upon a fence. >>In the slowness of winter's (or, a white freeze?)grasp >>The sun decided >>To entertain us. > > >Nice work.
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