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Subject: Re: We Were

Author:
Tralfaz

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Date Posted: 12:17:06 05/07/01 Mon
Author Host/IP: 64-66-95-23.hubris.net/64.66.95.23
In reply to: ElizabethGray 's message, "We Were" on 15:26:56 05/06/01 Sun

This is written beautifully. You do a great job of portraying the ache only a lover knows. I like your ability to put such deep feelings into your work.

>we were
>in a past life
>inseperable
>we were
>in love
>and although
>this life is harsh
>we are
>so far apart
>I look forward to
>the next
>possibly you'll be
>by my side again
>so now when I
>look into your eyes
>see such love
>feel you pass by
>know you're not mine
>I remember
>I was
>in a past life
>completely yours
>you were
>my one and only
>in a past life
>we were

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