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Subject: Bloxaway

Author:
Devil In Suit

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Date Posted: 18:07:20 04/18/01 Wed
Author Host/IP: spider-tl084.proxy.aol.com/152.163.207.214

Alright, having trouble. Do you think this poem is missing something? I wrote a part two, but in some ways I want to add it to this piece. And in some ways I don't. So, I guess tell me if this is alright.

Some friends don't hang
around as well as
they used to
it must be due
to new friends and old
grudges that haven't
weathered well I
see the clouds flooding
our sky again today
and I know you
will sit alone.

I guess I could
say don't let it
get you down but
I haven't seen you
in weeks so
how easy would it be
to let your face
fade from my
memory I still recall
days we kept one
another far from
harm but these days
don't fare well
for friends.

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Re: Bloxaway	Tony �:�{	23:03:24 04/20/01 Fri