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Subject: Re: Self Portrait in Vain


Author:
bluesies ( aka "blue" )
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Date Posted: 19:53:45 01/27/01 Sat
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In reply to: Leisa*) 's message, "Self Portrait in Vain" on 11:11:01 01/27/01 Sat

Leisa---

It's intriguing indeed, and most lovely.

A great number of images
blended nicely with activity...

I wonder about the title, though;
a vain prism comes to mind ( though
i often stretch to reach such conclusions ),
and tripped on " Arch victory's sweet sigh"
but don't change it, because it's a good trip,
it moves the poem and the reader.

(note to window pain---"we" are on fire,
and "we" are sinking...the plush artillery
is perhaps, say, sheets...or pillows...
or clouds)

There's a great many ways to go with this poem, Leisa----In short---I like!

Bluesies :)

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