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Date Posted: Saturday, August 26, 06:55:16pm
Author: Cynaera
Subject: Wow, Warren.
In reply to: warren 's message, "Re: Friday Challenge: August 18, 2006" on Friday, August 25, 09:42:37pm

Love. Hate. Art. Your writing is poetry, not prose. You use few words to convey huge, almost incomprehensible emotions, and that's why it's so compelling, and why it works so well.

This was very dead-on. I could relate to Nikita's observations, but also to Michael's actions. Active and passive tenses, playing off each other to create a very tense and thought-provoking scenario.

Good writing. Thank you for sharing it.

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  • On first reading (r) -- Jane Ann, Saturday, August 26, 07:25:56pm
  • Damn. -- Cynaera, Saturday, August 26, 08:49:33pm

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