Date Posted:22:31:27 10/21/10 Thu Author: Page2 Subject: Check your email>>>> In reply to:
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's message, "Here's the chapter >>>>" on 15:49:06 10/21/10 Thu
I sent you an email with some edits and my comments. It's easier to do tracking changes with Word than here. Hopefully, you'll find it helpful. Sometimes,the extra set of eyes does help. I hope mine were.
Glad to see you're working on it still and haven't given up hope. :-)
I am always in awe of your eagle eye! Thanks for catching my blunders.
I did add another paragraph which brings the word count up a tad. While re-reading I thought, "Well, jeez, Katie. Why don't you just move out then?" So I hit myself in the forehead and put it in. (She doesn't want to move out b/c Adam needs a flatmate so he can pay the rent.)
Thanks for the help! As always, it's mucho invaluable!!