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Date Posted: 06:33:10 11/16/10 Tue
Author: Debi
Subject: James is a hot mess, isn't he?
In reply to: Page2 's message, "A little something from Chapter 2...>>>" on 22:09:58 11/15/10 Mon

You've been busy! James is already an interesting character, and Seren gives us a few hints about why he's so tortured. At this point, I feel bad for them both. James is swept away by his success and overindulging in EVERYTHING, and Seren's stuck in that toxic body. Good work showing the relationship, not easy to do when one of the characters isn't a physical person.

Nice work, now keep it up! You can do it!

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[> [> [> Yes but he's already mellowing...>>> -- Page2, 13:13:58 11/17/10 Wed

Thanks for the post Deb. Glad you like it. It's coming along nicely. Will post an Emma excerpt later.

I hit the 20,000 mark in NaNo the other day. Great feeling. :-)

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