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Date Posted: 12:29:35 07/09/09 Thu
Author: Esther
Subject: Just poured a fresh one myself >>>
In reply to: Page 's message, "The Mystery of the Coffee >>>" on 21:57:17 07/03/09 Fri

And having taken a sip, I can vouch for the mystery of it. How can the DH make such a better pot of coffee than I??? *shrug*

As for this excerpt, I remember it well, almost well enough to notice the changes. *G* And after reading this a few times, I realize I have nothing to say except that you’ve done a great job on this scene. It has vivid descriptions, uses more that one of the senses, and it is a great introduction to Adam and to Katie herself. Well done!

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[> [> [> [> [> Hot dog! The boards are back up!!! >>>> -- Page, 21:23:55 07/11/09 Sat

>And having taken a sip, I can vouch for the mystery of
>it. How can the DH make such a better pot of coffee
>than I??? *shrug*

Ah, but does he leave the cupboard doors open? I used to think it was just my DH, but have come to realize it must be related to testosterone, as my son-in-law does it, too. *G*
>
>As for this excerpt, I remember it well, almost well
>enough to notice the changes. *G* And after reading
>this a few times, I realize I have nothing to say
>except that you’ve done a great job on this scene. It
>has vivid descriptions, uses more that one of the
>senses, and it is a great introduction to Adam and to
>Katie herself. Well done!

Thank you! As you know, *cough cough* I've fussed with the first chapter a number of times, and I think this one is my hands-down favorite. So I'm not touchin' it ever again. I swear on my new copy of Outlander!

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