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Date Posted: 19:39:22 03/12/11 Sat
Author: susiej
Subject: Giggling like a school girl >>>>
In reply to: Debi 's message, "Option 2" on 09:48:13 03/12/11 Sat

Verra cute. Loved all of it- don't have a crit. It flowed well and I "saw" everything.

The only comment I can make is that, for some reason, I did't get that we were in Daniel's POV until the line "it only made her more beautiful" So that made me say "Huh" for a moment but I can't say why I thought Daniel. Have we always been in his before? I've been so hit and miss maybe I was thinking of Molly. But I thought I'd mention it though I think it's my error.

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