Click here for an easy and free way to help feed the hungry at The Hunger Site! Non-profit ad by Voyager
VoyForums

Thursday, May 23, 07:09:07am [ VoyUser Login optional ] [ Main index ] [ Post a new message ] [ Search | Check update time | Archives: 1, 2, [3], 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10 ]

[ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ]

Date Posted: 09:27:21 05/15/10 Sat
Author: Esther
Subject: Hey Page >>>
In reply to: Page 's message, "Yes, I'm a homework ho. *G* This particular assignment got me moving on a part I've been trying to write for the past couple of weeks. The Line, Please prompt was what I needed to do it. >>>" on 16:04:16 05/06/10 Thu

The angst in this piece was phenomenal! The waiting, the words of the past, the forcing herself to go look. I was right there. And then the physical proof and her acceptance. This had a lot in it for such a short scene and you covered it all.

The only thing that made me go hmmm was in the firt paragraph. Two hours? What kind of archaic test was she using? Or is it me in the wrong time-period? *G*

Hugs

Esther

[ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ]

[ VoyUser Login ] Not required to post.
Post a public reply to this message | Go post a new public message
 * HTML allowed in marked fields.
* Message subject (required):

Name (required):

  Expression (Optional mood/title along with your name) Examples: (happy, sad, The Joyful, etc.) help)

  E-mail address (optional):

* Type your message here:

Choose Message Icon: [ View Emoticons ]

Notice: Copies of your message may remain on this and other systems on internet. Please be respectful.
 The Voy.com User Agreement applies to all visitors.



Forum timezone: GMT-5
VF Version: 2.94, ConfDB:
Before posting please read our privacy policy.
VoyForums(tm) is a Free Service from Voyager Info-Systems.
Copyright © 1998-2012 Voyager Info-Systems. All Rights Reserved.