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Date Posted: 09:47:25 05/15/10 Sat
Author: Esther
Subject: Those darn fates! >>>
In reply to: debikm 's message, "The Line, please always seems to draw me in..." on 17:45:02 05/06/10 Thu

They sure know how to make up a story though. A nice twist that I didn't expect, that's for sure. And excellent depiction of both the accident itself and the emotions after the effect. Loved the way you described how remote she felt, and how she seemed to be seeing things from a distance. That put me right there. Awesome.

Hugs

Esther

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[> [> [> Thank you Esther! -- Debi, 18:28:42 05/15/10 Sat

>They sure know how to make up a story though. A nice
>twist that I didn't expect, that's for sure. And
>excellent depiction of both the accident itself and
>the emotions after the effect. Loved the way you
>described how remote she felt, and how she seemed to
>be seeing things from a distance. That put me right
>there. Awesome.
>
>Hugs
>
>Esther

I'm glad you were right in the action. I've been involved in a minor accident or two, and seen some big ones happen in front of me. There's always that sense of slow-motion, of seeing things from a slight distance, which I understand is the adrenaline working and speeing your reaction time, to fight or flight. Even when I was only a witness, I got the big adrenaline squeeze, with heart pounding and shaking hands. not fun, but it does help later on when trying to describe it.

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