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Date Posted: 10:33:49 03/23/10 Tue
Author: Alex
Subject: Re: Hi, everybody! Whoo!
In reply to: Larn 's message, "Hi, everybody! Whoo!" on 01:18:18 03/23/10 Tue

I remember reading the lead in scene way back when...and I think I was one of the yellers of 'No fair!' too. *s* Very gratifying to get to read the rest. Terrific illustration of action and other than a few spots where I thought the dialog got a little wordy (which I suspect is just me being picky) I breezed right along and was annoyed I couldn't turn the page and keep going! *g* Get this story published, will you? I want to take it down and thumb through it at my leisure. ;0)

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[> [> [> Yeah, it was a bit wordy... -- Larn, 14:26:41 03/23/10 Tue

>... a few spots where I thought the dialog got a
>little wordy

No, I hear you. Mike tends to wax poetic, if I want him to or not. He likes to talk, and I need to get a handle on it.

As for publishing well, I should probably finish it first, eh? Sigh.

Thanks for the words of encouragement!

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