Date Posted:11:08:02 04/03/10 Sat Author: Debi Subject: I like this very much! In reply to:
susiej
's message, "Re: This way please >>>" on 18:50:34 03/31/10 Wed
Maybe it's just how visual I am, it's the way I learn best, but putting some action in with the dialogue has helped clear it up for me and makes it easier for me to follow. The tension was very real and the emotion was clear. Cadmus is even starting to grow on me some, he's not just a black or white character, he's getting some shades of grey that intrigue me. Excellent! (and I'm in line for one of these guys if Heather lets one go. I'm just saying...)
>Maybe it's just how visual I am, it's the way I learn
>best, but putting some action in with the dialogue has
>helped clear it up for me and makes it easier for me
>to follow.
Hmmmm You know you have me worried with this right? I mean, that's what I thought I was doing all along! Er...or tried to anyway... *G*
The tension was very real and the emotion
>was clear.
Cool!
Cadmus is even starting to grow on me some,
>he's not just a black or white character, he's getting
>some shades of grey that intrigue me. Excellent! (and
Whoo hoo! Yes! I had hoped Cadmus was on his way to being a more three dimensional character. He certainly goes head to head with me more often than I'd like *G*
>I'm in line for one of these guys if Heather lets one
>go. I'm just saying...)
LOL K, I'll add you to the list, but I'm still trying to figure out your preference *G*
