Re: The Beast, Redux >>>>>> -- Ladies of Lallybroch Literary Forum

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Date Posted: 12:02:57 09/04/09 Fri
Author: Lady Morilka
Subject: Re: The Beast, Redux >>>>>>
In reply to: Page 's message, "The Beast, Redux >>>>>>" on 21:31:31 08/23/09 Sun

I like this version much better. It flowes more. And the added scene the next morning is great. Great imagees, and the calm fury of Jay is coming over really threatening. Great!

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>I like this version much better. It flowes more. And >the added scene the next morning is great. Great >imagees, and the calm fury of Jay is coming over >really threatening. Great!
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