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Date Posted: 13:17:48 09/05/09 Sat
Author: Debi
Subject: Thanks Larn
In reply to: Larn 's message, "Now I've got the shivers." on 11:56:16 08/31/09 Mon

>>Heaven was falling to earth in a torrential
>>thunderstorm. The Vega’s windshield wipers were having
>>trouble keeping up.
>
>Nitpicky, but I think these two sentences should be
>one with a great big and between them. Feels like it
>mights flow a little better.
>
Good point.
>
What happened to the samples? Not going to deliver any
>more? Unless they are brought up later as a kind of
>"oh crap I forgot" sort of thing, they should be
>mentioned.
>
I've cleared that up a bit in the rewrite. She's on her way home aftr dropping them off.

>Fantastic as per usual!

Thankee ma'am!

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>>>Heaven was falling to earth in a torrential >>>thunderstorm. The Vega’s windshield wipers were >having >>>trouble keeping up. >> >>Nitpicky, but I think these two sentences should be >>one with a great big and between them. Feels like it >>mights flow a little better. >> >Good point. >> >What happened to the samples? Not going to deliver any >>more? Unless they are brought up later as a kind of >>"oh crap I forgot" sort of thing, they should be >>mentioned. >> >I've cleared that up a bit in the rewrite. She's on >her way home aftr dropping them off. > >>Fantastic as per usual! > >Thankee ma'am!
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