Date Posted:17:46:53 03/23/10 Tue Author:susiej Subject: Thanks again, Page>>>> In reply to:
Page
's message, "Crit inside. >>>>" on 16:32:31 03/23/10 Tue
Poor you- how many times have you had to read this? But thanks-I knew some of the spots that were iffy and you hit them all. I think one of my problem is that Rose isn't really aware exactly how scary she is to those who don't know her. She really is odd to them. She's Fae-she doesn't really notice that she creates wind, or her own eyes gleaming like a cat, stuff like that.
And that yea, she actually does hear everything that everyone around her says.
I once tried an opening where the villagers were all talking about her before you met her, but most people didn't like that- start with the MC they said. Especially in YA. Thanks,again, it always helps to see it from your eyes. (I had out the part that said the rowan grew by the door!)
susiej