Here's a link <a href= http://misssnarksfirstvictim.blogspot.com/ >click</a> So, is your steaming Brit one of the entries? I did one but it was hard to whittle it into a 25 that worked. Not really my true first sent. But still, a good test. -- Ladies of Lallybroch Literary Forum

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Date Posted: 19:21:31 03/25/10 Thu
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susiej
Subject: Here's a link click So, is your steaming Brit one of the entries? I did one but it was hard to whittle it into a 25 that worked. Not really my true first sent. But still, a good test.
In reply to: Page 's message, "The hook! The hook!" on 11:34:16 03/25/10 Thu

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[> [> Yea! A link! Thanks, Susie. Voy won't let me type the B word. Yes, Carey On is in there. 17 comments, 16 positive. I liked the one you submitted!! Unfortunately, another friend is getting slammed with hers, and bad. I don't know what to say to her. -- Page, 21:25:35 03/25/10 Thu

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[> [> [> Rock on, Page! Great first line. Really. And I'm excited because even with my abbreviated first, I got what I wanted. Several said right away they identified/sympathized with Rose- so I think I finally overcame my distant POV. Woot. --

susiej, 22:32:51 03/25/10 Thu

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[> [> [> As to your friend, just remind her that if first sentences were easy there wouldn't be 175 people wanting help on theirs. It doesn't mean the story itsef if bad. -- susiej, 15:42:16 03/26/10 Fri

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