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Date Posted: 01:25:01 07/13/09 Mon
Author: Larn
Subject: Emma does not learn the baby-making lesson very well. Not safe for work or kiddies!
In reply to: Larn 's message, "Being sick is stupid." on 14:24:05 07/12/09 Sun



More. This is one of the last major events before the end of the novel. Emma and Michael are in a cabin far up in the mountains, ostentatiously to winterize the cabin and restock emergency rations. The light snow that began their trip turned into a steady downfall, but they are well prepared for the weather. They had a fight, mostly because Michael thinks Emma is going to sleep with him that night. Emma's pissed because he's probably right.


I heard him come in, slamming his boots against the doorframe to knock off the show. The blast of cold air alone would have woken me, but I ignored it and pretended sleep. I lay on my side at the edge of the bed, cursing myself for not facing the other direction.

The door closed and I could hear the boss breathing. Just standing there. Then, thunk! Thunk! His boots hit the side wall, and his quiet, furtive sounds of movement made me curious. I risked a tiny peek from one eye.

He had found a piece of rope and was busy tying a makeshift clothesline around the cabin. So that was what those hooks were for. He moved very deliberately, pulling the rope taunt, hanging my coveralls and outerwear to dry just so. He then shrugged out of his own parka and threw it over a section near the fire, arranging it so it hung evenly. His coveralls went next, snow sliding in great chunks to melt on the floor. His under jacket, his thermals, then, dear god. I closed my eyes, trying not to think about how far the striptease would go.

His breath was faster now, gasping in the cold. I heard him pad quickly over to the bed, felt his weight on the mattress behind me. He climbed under the blankets, letting in a shaft of cold air that made me shiver.

He lay still. I think he was on his back. His breath was shallow.

Slowly, I felt his warmth creep over to my side of the bed. At first it was welcome, then damned near uncomfortable.

"You're not asleep," he said.

I let out the breath I had been holding but didn't answer him.

He shifted in the bed. Closer. Just behind me. I felt his voice against my neck.

"And you're not ignoring me."

His hand slid over my waist, underneath my shirt, spread wide against my stomach. He moved even closer, fitting his knees behind mine and my back to his chest. For half a second, I wished I hadn't gone to bed covered in flannel. I wondered how much of it he still had on.

His hand kept moving under my clothes. He traced over my hip, reaching as far down my thigh as he could, then up along my spine and finally, under my arm to cup my breast in his palm. I started to shake a little.

Groaning slightly, he took his hand from my shirt and put a finger on my cheek, tracking along towards my ear, down my jaw. When he reached my lips, I couldn't help myself. I kissed the tip of his finger.

"Ha!" He shouted, startling my eyes open. Next thing I knew was being under him, next to his skin, feeling the heat of it even through my thermal underwear. He kissed me, good and long, pulling his lips from mine just long enough to breathe and go back for more.

We reached for the hem of my shirt at the same time. He pulled it up over my head and yanked hard on it when it got hitched under my ears.

“Ow!" I said. "Wait. It’s stuck. Just wait. Wait. Oh.”

But his lips were already on my breasts, nibbling, licking. I wriggled, but my shirt was firmly stuck around my neck.

“Shit. Seriously, Michael, just wait a second. Let me undo the buttons.”

His mouth left my chest and I felt him bury his face in my stomach. He was shaking. I pushed the shirt low enough to work open the damnably tiny buttons, then flung the wretched thing across the room. I think it landed in the sink.

“Fucking shirt.” I looked down at him. “Are you laughing at me?”

“Here I am, trying to be romantic and make love to you and the first thing you say is 'Ow!'”

“I’m surprised you heard me at all.”

“I can’t help it. Your breasts are glorious.”

“They are not. They’re lopsided.”

“Really?” He rose above me, raising the blankets with him. He made a great show of studying my breasts.

“You’re letting in a draft. I’ll get all goose-pimply.”

He put a hand on each one, kneading softly, gave them a little wiggle.

“You know, I think you’re right. The left one is just a little bit bigger.”

“Thank you for confirming a complex I’ve had since ninth grade.”

“One of my balls is bigger than the other.”

“Really?”

“Oh yeah. I thought I had cancer when I was six.”

I reached in between us and felt him up.

“A little gentler this time, please,” he said, not looking all too worried.

I gave him a tiny squeeze.

“Oh sheesh, it’s hardly noticeable.”

“Hardly noticeable? Now that will give a guy a complex.”

I moved my hand slightly north, gripping with a little more force. He let his breath out in a whoosh.

“Notice that?”

In response, he put his hands on the waistband of my thermal bottoms and shoved them down to my knees. When I lifted my legs to kick them off, Michael took full advantage, settling down between my thighs. I shivered.

“You’re cold,” he said. “We can fix that.”

He reached behind him and pulled the covers up over his shoulders, over our heads, cocooning us in blankets. For a moment, we simply breathed, letting the dark space between us grow warm.

I raised my head to kiss him. I found his nose instead but kissed it anyway.

“I want to feel you, Emma. I want to feel your fingers. Touch me."

“Where?”

“Anywhere. Everywhere.”

So I touched him, slid my fingertips across his back, let my palms drag down towards his rear, pressed him closer. His tongue found my earlobe, breath warm and loud. I stroked his ribs, wrapped my arms tight across his back. We twisted together like smoke in the dark, closer than was thought possible. We began to sweat and slide against each other. He licked the salt from my skin, his lips lingering on the hollow of my throat. My hands caught in his hair, pushed his mouth to my breast.

His weight grew heavier on top of me, sinking me into the bed. It was a glorious pressure. I wanted more.

“Please.” I moved my hips, bucking up under him. “Please. Now.”

We paused again, the air around us had grown hot and heavy. I reached between us and took him in hand, guiding him to me. He lowered his forehead to mine.

He entered me in one long, smooth glide. He stayed there, pressed into me, part of me, breathing with me. He pushed in further, then withdrew.

It was a slow rhythm at first, more like the gentle rocking of a hammock, comforting and easy, like waves on an ocean, our small gasps the crest of whitecaps against sand. But I didn’t want smooth sailing. I wanted a firestorm.

So I pushed up to meet him, raising my hips off the bed to meet his thrust.

“More,” I breathed. It was the only word I could think of.

“Yes, more,” he said, taking my waist in his hands. “Much more.”

We began in earnest then, stealing what kisses and caresses we could between the eager surging thrusts. Soon our panting became grunts, our gasps became groaning, and I began to hover on the edge of something sharp.

He lowered his mouth to my breast once more and gave it a sharp nip. My legs convulsed across his thighs. We moved faster. I could hear the bedpost smacking against the wall, the horses moving in the next room, but nothing mattered except the rasp of his voice and the sound of skin on skin, the bursts of my own strained voice when I told him I wanted even more.

He buried one hand in my hair and pressed his face into my neck. I felt his tongue on my pulse, a hot burst of sensation with every heartbeat.

It started in my toes. My calves flexed and my knees moved wider apart. A hot, wet feeling went through me, pulling every muscle tight, forcing the air from my lungs in a wild cry. I felt him bite my shoulder and shudder into me, pressing, holding, releasing deep inside me.

My nose was buried into his neck. I inhaled him, us, the scent of our mingling. He started to move but I held him close, afraid to lose the moment. Turning his head to meet my lips, he kissed any objections away as he slowly lifted himself from me.

We settled with him behind me, one of his legs thrown up between mine. It would have seemed so easy to stay like that forever, to forget the ranch, the snow, even my name, and just be with him. To soak up his love and push everything else away.

Instead, I fell asleep. I hope I didn’t snore.

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[> [> ....I might have posted this earlier, but I rewrote some of it. So it's kinda different. Anyway. Ahem. -- Larn, 01:33:02 07/13/09 Mon


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[> [> *chuckle* and hot... -- Debi, 06:48:10 07/13/09 Mon

Love it, wonderful, gloriously awkward and funny at moments, just like the Real Thing. I can't find a thing to nit-pick. And this line, it's the perfect ending.

>Instead, I fell asleep. I hope I didn’t snore.

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[> [> Re: Emma does not learn the baby-making lesson very well. Not safe for work or kiddies! -- Debi, 21:25:06 07/13/09 Mon

One tiny thing I missed the first time.
He pulled the rope *taut*, not taunt.

That is all. ;-)

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[> [> All I'm going to say to this one is WOW cause I'm still busy fanning myself. *G* -- Esther, 14:42:54 07/17/09 Fri


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[> [> Well, you know, body heat is the best thing for keeping warm on those blustery, snowy nights....>>>>>> -- Page, 23:19:56 07/17/09 Fri

Not only is this hot and spicy, it's very true to life. I think that's why it's so titillating! Her concern over her breasts being uneven, the shirt getting stuck under her ears (I laughed out loud at that!), all the real things real couples do. And then getting it on and making the real world go away. Very well done!!!

Hugs,
Page

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