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Date Posted: 18:32:30 05/14/09 Thu
Author: Debi
Subject: Great imagery...
In reply to: dea 's message, "Photo # 2" on 17:27:49 05/14/09 Thu

Compelling, captivating... I can see the metaphorical search... very nice!

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[> [> Hurray variety! -- Larn, 22:11:23 05/19/09 Tue

I love alternatives to prose! You did get the right photo for it.

Only one note:

dreams of balms of holy graces

I think this line is a little awkward, with the repeating word. I think with a bit of a tweak it could be a stronger phrase.

Nice. I can def hear this set to music.

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