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Date Posted: 20:47:35 10/08/09 Thu
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Subject: ATTENTION Lit Forum! Susie's suggestions should be required reading for all writers! >>>>
In reply to: susiej 's message, "OK- here's my suggestions." on 10:56:47 10/08/09 Thu

Susie, you know just how to cut through the clutter, and let the action shine. I cannot tell you how much I appreciate your help with this scene! The things you suggested made me slap my head, and say, "Of course! That reads so much better!" I have printed out your suggestions, and will refer to them as I continue to write, because they are wonderful examples of how to streamline a manuscript.

Thank you so much for taking the time to do this!

Hugs,
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