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Date Posted: 04:55:05 11/05/11 Sat
Author: Shallow end of the pool
Subject: Re: PG hed
In reply to: Heddy Lamarsky 's message, "PG hed" on 20:14:16 11/04/11 Fri

That's more of an indictment of your reading comprehension than it is the headline writer.

Just saying!


>PG headling 11/4:
>Erie man arrested in death of Pittsburgh man found
>along highway
>What was the arrested Erie man found doing along the
>highway? Had to read the story to find out that the
>dead Pittsburgh man was found in a car along the
>highway. Just saying!

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[> [> Re: PG hed -- Heddy, 20:59:03 11/05/11 Sat [1]


Okay, confused, so you are the one who wrote that poor excuse for a hed, and what you are saying is that a confusing hed is what you aimed for so as to make the reader want to understand it by reading the story.

>That's more of an indictment of your reading
>comprehension than it is the headline writer.
>
>Just saying!
>
>
>>PG headling 11/4:
>>Erie man arrested in death of Pittsburgh man found
>>along highway
>>What was the arrested Erie man found doing along the
>>highway? Had to read the story to find out that the
>>dead Pittsburgh man was found in a car along the
>>highway. Just saying!

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[> [> Re: PG hed -- Gotta agree, 22:22:20 11/05/11 Sat [1]

This one is you. There isn't anything wrong with the headline.

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