yo dlaster... you want beef... lets have a battle.... I"ll post mine up and you can post ya lame ass piece of shit... -- The Lounge Of Lyricism 2003

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Date Posted: 19:41:13 03/07/03 Fri
Author: the dark spitter aka supreme vocab.
Author Host/IP: kala2.k12.hi.us / 165.248.247.132
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yo dlaster... you want beef... lets have a battle.... I"ll post mine up and you can post ya lame ass piece of shit...

dlaster want beef?/
dlaster gets shreded into piles of human meat/
left in a disgusting heap of a un-intelligent emcee/
see/
why you diss the style you wished you had?/
I grab you fag and rip entrials out the anatomy with each grasps/
gift of gab packed vocab stabs and jabs when devious structures are planned/
dlaster the un-elevated homosexual bastard/
I'm faster/
to distruct the bladder/
master to leave the soul in tatters/
shatterd/
brains inclined and totally batterd in matter/
elevate with potential son and climb the lyricist lounge ladder/
a dark spitter chapter and see's dlasters name and replies in laughter/
aftermath backdrafts when battlin spitter in wack manners/
your identidiy will be demolished and crushed right before your eyes/
the rhymes penetrate the dlaster spine and blow it up like viacong land mines/
mad lines/
deroding the eyes each time you glance at this/
I throw voclal hooks equivilent to tony atlis/
so mrs dlaster... can you come to the ring with my infinte flames and really match this?/

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This was OKAY..um, I don't know what Dlester, whatever his name is, will bring...I seriously think this would be better in audio...and you know..if you're going to BATTLE, try thinking of NEW punchlines and ideas...most of these lines are something any other MC would spit, naw mean??...but I'll assume this kid isn't going to post any better anyway...Regarding your other posts, "Don't try too hard" quote N.A.K.I.X.E.M...this was okay shit..DID YOU EVEN READ MY EMAIL???...understand it...peace (NT) -- WHYMSICKAL, 20:58:14 03/07/03 Fri
this was good, solid battle rap. when dlaster responds I'll compare the two (NT) -- mad hermit, 21:01:40 03/07/03 Fri
coo... it looked chopped up a lil bit... but you should do an audio!... it had some nice lines... and yo name is dark sumthin! (NT) -- Darknodin, 22:23:27 03/07/03 Fri
Supreme Vocab? this read out like it was written by a 6th grader...and not a talented 6th grader at that... (NT) -- XitiZeN, 01:48:06 03/08/03 Sat
BWHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA...ahem....BWHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA man why must you even battle...aint even worth it for such a sorry battle verse..LOL you need more PUNCHES, more MULTIS , throw in some METAPHORS THATLL split HIM IN 2 so you can kill dlaster while you still beating him TOO haha (NT) -- NOflow, 02:29:18 03/09/03 Sun
man, whoever you're battlin is gonna get at you somethin nasty if you don't up ya game, 1 (NT) -- Novakane, 04:08:13 03/09/03 Sun
keep workin at it. (NT) -- nemesis, 12:12:05 03/09/03 Sun
the dark spitter vs dlaster... vote on this battle... nothing else.... -- the dark spitter aka un jibaro de puerto rico, 15:35:48 03/12/03 Wed

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