<font color=RED> **AUDIO** <font color=yellow> first audio, got a sound click page..titled <font color=lightgreen> STRUGGLES <font color=yellow> How hard do you get down...do you still fight? the struggles one man delt with but still aimed for his goal..Deep thoughts -- The Lounge Of Lyricism 2003

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Date Posted: 00:59:10 03/10/03 Mon
Author: NoFlow
Author Host/IP: dialup-65.56.89.77.Dial1.SanDiego1.Level3.net / 65.56.89.77
Subject: **AUDIO** first audio, got a sound click page..titled STRUGGLES How hard do you get down...do you still fight? the struggles one man delt with but still aimed for his goal..Deep thoughts

Took Dunns advice to step into audio a while back..if you remember or not buddy...
i posted lyrics too for those who might not understand me, its only a sample verse
i plan to finish it as a Callaberation with my friends, well be better next time, this just a 2or3-take..so youll know why its whack
peep and please give critique

Beat: Jay-Z dead presidents...yea im a THEIF..haha
first audio give feedback plz

lofi: http://www.soundclick.com/util/streamM3U.m3u?ID=262178&q=Lo

hifi: http://www.soundclick.com/util/streamM3U.m3u?ID=262178&q=Hi

download :http://www.soundclick.com/util/DownloadSong.cfm?ID=262178

The Struggles one man can deal with is evenly split
Threw times in life he strives to heights in a world deep in strife�s
Can�t dim his lights, he�s survived his nights and he rise to fight
He dreams in lights, as he sits in dark, ready to spark and embark to his climax arch
Marked with heart, an art that�s forever imprison
But darkness he�s living, he�s hidden within thoughts of his visions
Supplied with domestic incisions
He�s bleeding, receding back infancy beatings
From his mother nursing him feeding him eating
And now she�s recently repeatedly raging and screaming
his dad beating him down in the mist of the evening
His thoughts are hatred conceiving
Wishing to put an end to his life, as he sits and cries
Till something deep in his eyes drives till his pupils stretch and they wide
Hoping to rise, when his heart doubles in size
Then he snaps and he dives in the heart of his dream, he�s floating supreme
Taking down every obstacle that�s passing his wing
His anger that steams
A bomb that�s ready to ring and explode and fight till he�s free
Reaching for his point, he�s extending every joint
Stands to his feet, the man that started from nothing and Struggled and hustled till he stands as Elite//

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you sound like that one cat from Nappy Roots that was rappin on the hill....ya flow aint bad, you stayed on beat...but the levels of ya vocals was.....shitty youngsta...not bad for a first (NT) -- Vision...Thrice Optics of Abzent Minded of O.M.N.I., 01:24:49 03/10/03 Mon
The lyrics are ok, but the vocals need to be a lil louder so that you have more impact (NT) -- MIDEVAL, 01:39:13 03/10/03 Mon
couldnt listen, but your scemes look a little like eminem style,but as i said i haven�t heard it....Other then that ; dis is not bad (NT) -- chromenine, 03:25:03 03/10/03 Mon
The lyrics were hot but work on flow and attitude a lil more! overall, it was nice to listen to! 1st audio? nice! keep doin it! (NT) -- Gruesum Thoughtz, 10:20:52 03/10/03 Mon

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