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Date Posted: 13:20:30 03/11/03 Tue
Author: THE DARK SPITTER AKA HATERS LIKE WHYSMIKAL DONT REALLY HAVE TALENT
Author Host/IP: kala2.k12.hi.us / 165.248.247.132
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THE DARK SPITTER PRESENTS... "UNVIELED"... PEEP AND CRITICIZE

UNVIELED INDENTIDY/
THE UNTANGLED TRUTH/
MY REBELLIOUS ACTIONS USE AND ABUSE/
UPBEAT MORAL ACTIONS/
EMOTIONS IGNITED WITH PHOSPHORUS FRACTIONS/
PHENOMENONS DATED BACK AND TRANSLATED IN LATIN/
MY UNVIELED KNOWLEDGE/
WITH ENOUGH BRAIN TO ENROLL ME IN COLLAGE/
NEVER ENDING POTENTIAL ROCKIN/
MY MONOPHONIC VOICE STALKING BEATS OFTEN/
I LEAVE THOSE "GOODLUCK" WITH INFECTIONOUS GANGREEN/
AND STILL I'M NOT OF "CELTIC" ORIGIN NOR EVEN FROM "BOSTON"/
I JUGGLE TWO DIFFERENT PERSONALTIES THAT'LL LEAVE YOUR JUDGEMENT FROSTED/
"DOPE" WAYS WITH ACUTE "JOINTS" THAT'LL LEAVE A JOUST WITH/
ILLISTRATED IMAGES OF A UNVIELED CULTURE/
MY DIALECTS IN IDIOMS LEAVE THIS READER AMAZINGLY SMULTERD/
SPITTER GIVES HYBRID THEORYS AND BELIFES THATS TOTALLY ALTERD/
ON THIS GLOBE/
IT'S U-N-I-VERSE-AL/
"THE ROOTS" OF ORIGIN STAND OUT AND STAND TALL/
I DART WITH ILL SKILLS IN 4 SEASONS AND MAKE EMCEES TOPPLE WITH THE "FALL"/
THE DARK SPITTERS WAYS CONTRASTED IN THE BRIGHTEST ELEMENTS LIKE POPE PAUL/
WITNESS AND BEHOLD TRUE APPEARENCE WHEN I'M EXTRUSIVE AND AND UNVIELED ON THE REAL TESTIMENTS YOU SAW/
EMCEES GET THERE SELVES MAULED AND GAGGED THEN SLASHED WITH NUMEROUS AMOUNTS OF WEAPONS THAT DISOBAY THE LAW/
IN SCRPITURES IT STATES THE DARK SPITTERS IN A HUMAN BODY BUT UDERNETHE THE ARTIFICAL IT UN UNVIELS A MUTANT EXOSKLETON/
CARTILAGE LIKE GELETIN/
THE WAYS ARE FACTS OF TRUE SO THEY PENETRATE DEEP WITHEN THE BONE MARROW AND ERUPT THE FRAGILE ABDOMIN/
UNVIELED....

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...You call yourself the vocabulist or some corny shit and you still misspell shit like crazy....you wack man..... (NT) -- «‡†¤N.a.K.I.X.e.M.¤†‡» aka Ðamien Christ, 13:49:28 03/11/03 Tue
Fuck caps.. dont do that anymore.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 14:23:59 03/11/03 Tue
cough cough, sorry, ok, rhyme was ok but i hate it when people type in capitals (NT) -- nemesis, 15:03:43 03/11/03 Tue
to all repliers... sorry for the caps.. and to the first replier... I guess you love beef and want to be rip to smitherines... dont fuck around man..... FUCKIN FAGGOT!!! and yo if you want a battle I'm all ready bitch.... fuckin haters!!!! (NT) -- ThE DaRk SpItTeR of the ReAlMs, 15:10:00 03/11/03 Tue
hahahahahhahahah....he said....he said........hahaha ......oh boy smitherines.....lol......im sorry, that just tickled me a little (NT) -- Vision, 16:08:36 03/11/03 Tue
yo first off man this wasn't bad. it had a few good lines but overall was kinda hard to follow but keep doin you. and instead of taking negative critism to the heart use it to influence yourself to create some off the wall new shit! after all it's music (NT) -- starks, 15:24:47 03/11/03 Tue
I can't believe I read this with those caps.. it was pretty good.. but never write a whole verse in caps.. it's just wack and hard to read.. peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 17:48:06 03/11/03 Tue
HAHA@you even THINKING about battling Diz...WHO the FUCK battles in TEXT now days???...it's like...fuckin' HISTORY...I ain't gonna waste my time with YOU boy...I gave criticism and you react like a BITCH...so a bitch YOU ARE...nuff said. (NT) -- WHYMSICKAL..., 20:58:23 03/11/03 Tue
you still a bitch arse hater when will you ever learn, your not as good as you think you are, so dont step to DLAR (NT) -- DLASTER, 22:46:19 03/11/03 Tue
Was not bad at all except these stupid caps. CAPS ARE ONLY USED TO MAKE READING MORE EASY INSTEAD OF DIFFICULTdon´t wanna bother u, but there is a certain concept behind the way things written, and how ur eye percepts visions.... U givin me a fuckin headache readin yo shit but it was coo anyway.... (NT) -- chromenine, 04:03:11 03/12/03 Wed

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