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Date Posted: 03:17:40 01/07/03 Tue
Author: MIDEVAL
Author Host/IP: h24-71-145-82.ss.shawcable.net / 24.71.145.82
Subject: Actually liked this diss man, some of the lines were used b4, but then what lines are really original...shit, there are only so many in a persons vocab. I really liked the wordplay, no doubt some thought out shit right here with the foreplay bla bla. I liked it!
In reply to: beans 's message, "BLACK EARTH (DISS)" on 00:06:23 01/07/03 Tue


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  • Nothing too fancy. I would believe you if you told me it was a keystyle. Lines are OK, scheme is good. Multi-syllabic rhyme scheme is roughly present. Just work on harder lines. Battles are supposed to hurt feelings. I give it a "C" cuz its average. Its not wack, but it isnt great either. -- J-MadD, 05:05:46 01/07/03 Tue




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