What up Lounge...this is a short battle verse for this cat called Reborn...its a friendly battle at another site...enjoy! -- The Lounge Of Lyricism 2003

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Date Posted: 14:00:10 01/09/03 Thu
Author: Versetyle of Abzent Minded
Author Host/IP: host213-123-153-103.in-addr.btopenworld.com / 213.123.153.103
Subject: What up Lounge...this is a short battle verse for this cat called Reborn...its a friendly battle at another site...enjoy!

You've been sonned so often the only name that fits you is 'reborn'/
I'm about to give you more hits that google gets for 'free porn'/
Given a chance in hip-hop you'll be known as the emcee who blew it/
Like if you ended your 'Reebok freestyle' with the line 'Just do it!'/
Its a mystery how to beat me, and you couldn't have 'the answers'/
If you had a whole army of Iversons cloned by Raelians while plasterd/
Faggot is fooled by Nas everytime, kid's beggin MTV not to shoot/
I hope kid 'leaves' before i'm forced to 'break you off' at 'the roots'/
You spendin another night at home, poppin asparin dressed as a thug/
How many times have i told you, it cost more than '50 cent' to 'get in da club'!'/
I have a sadistic nature, i don't hate ya i just wanna abuse your health/
And ur still not allowed in K-Mart alone for fear that you'll 'lose yourself'/
Grow up kid coz you've just stepped in the ring with a master of this/
Your New Year's resolution should've been to give disaster a miss/
Good job you limited the lines to sixteen, that's true damage control/
Let me fix your problem, as i rip your skin off just to bandage your skull/

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i like the first couple of lines more then the other ones (NT) -- Tactics, 15:31:51 01/09/03 Thu
Nice verse.. you're gettin better at this battling thing.. I liked the first 2 punches the most.. dope shit.. -- ===||Swords--->, 17:43:34 01/09/03 Thu
haha...dope....the first two lines were very witty and creative, the rest of the piece was ill too, just those were very nice...keep on James...slow~ (NT) -- S-ENSE...AM, 17:54:24 01/09/03 Thu
The free porn line, the reebok freesyle line, and the bandage ya skull lines were pretty dope... overall, nice battle spit. 1 (NT) -- INTOX, 18:21:53 01/09/03 Thu
This was a nice lil battle piece. You had some pretty slick lines up in here. Keep doin what you do (NT) -- Brail, 18:53:36 01/09/03 Thu
WASNT BAD AT ALL....had some nice lines in here, alot better cause u were kinda stinky at battling, but ur improving, peace (NT) -- S.T.G.E. © aka "DAVID DUNN aka ILLER THAN THOU" of O.M.N.I.², 11:26:36 01/10/03 Fri

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