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Date Posted: 22:01:03 01/14/03 Tue
Author: INTOX
Author Host/IP: pcp02328294pcs.summit01.nj.comcast.net / 68.84.56.159
Subject: what you need to do is something completely different than this... the whole "tortured soul" and "manically depressed" shit?? TIRED! I don't understand why, when someone sits down and says "ok i'm gonna do some deep shit now"... it always comes out depressing as fuck!! Focus on some more positive shit, then write about it, and I probably still won't like it. But it won't be this, which is improvement.
In reply to: Abraham 's message, "tell me what i need to do to improve....Its a short Rhyme about all the shit ive been threw with my mom.." on 21:54:39 01/14/03 Tue


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  • Like I said,,,,,,earlier I feel your pain but I dont feel the verse.........Step it up man.................Ghost (NT) -- Wes Jones, 00:55:47 01/15/03 Wed






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