AN ALL-NEW POST.....ANOTHER DEFINITIVE PETRARCHAN SONNET...."One Man's Spirit" Part 6....Warning: h � k �-A-linguistics, Phantasmagorical Imagery, Hebraisms, And Intrinsic Metaphors May Cause Mind-Stops...BE ADVISED BEFORE ENTERING... -- The Lounge Of Lyricism 2003

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Date Posted: 17:05:32 03/06/03 Thu
Author: h � k �-A-g � �/|_ A \/ � � h...aka tH� � l e � h �� |� e � � � �| J�
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Subject: AN ALL-NEW POST.....ANOTHER DEFINITIVE PETRARCHAN SONNET...."One Man's Spirit" Part 6....Warning: h � k �-A-linguistics, Phantasmagorical Imagery, Hebraisms, And Intrinsic Metaphors May Cause Mind-Stops...BE ADVISED BEFORE ENTERING...

From The Year 5697 (2137 A.D.)

I've settled my spirit into this mere existence..since sin's a miscreant......
.........readying to deal my soul the card of disappearance........
........"Instant clearance?"........
Similar in ways in comparison to the "above-average Julius Africanus demeanor...
........I'm offered assistance..'cause I AM Gnosticism's Demiurge............
.............there's no Army of Persistance upholding resistance..........
"Consider my beginning just as confusing as...well, any second-thought God disregarded......"
Trip the guards at the pearly gates in front of YAH's Manor.......
.........if only manner would allow the attributes of vexed telepathy..........
Extra weaponry from this misanthropic-mentality...creating anomalies.........
........blinding, then breaking through family-binds...........
Inanity finds sanity's shine...and shuts out the daylight that's utilized for the eyes of a nigh Sky Spy
--h � k �/|_ A \/�....

A Petrarchan Sonnet:

"You can at least thank The LORD for allowing one in the � l e s h to address such a mindstate!"
Concentric idealisms sometimes conflict against the tense defense mechanisms..."Now, I feel rejected!"
Inflicted by the sharp standpoints..in by which no dull moment ever comes to pass..except to surpass The Elected
I AM the end-time esoteric Imhotep..alive again to bring about the isolating feel of Thanatology's Grace
"It's swift to drift the soul into the Blackest Realm..................I move with haste..
....no patience dwelling as a "symbiotic essence" within the binds of the Soul's Seven Corners..That's hectic!"
I speak with Inanity's Baritone...scaring the Christ-conscious with some sense that seems honestly defected
....I AM the perfected...I AM the selected...I AM what's called........"The Abstruse Sage"......
Saturated in the mental cycles that are the atavistics of Immanuel Kant......denying the truth of Christianity
Vanity's Shit slips off the lips of Humanity's Wit..leaving me with the moldy-leftovers of simple thoughts
......"Even crippled plots need a helping hand just to get off the ground and start moving!"..........
Mankind is an easy target...especially in this season of uneasy reasoning and feasible sanity......
I AM a long, forgotten figure in history....a mystery that leaves many blissfully disfigured as their conscience rots
"So stop assuming I AM confused with the many attributes of 'outer-physical' and 'power-spiritual' cocooning!"

Narrator:
"Alright, alright...here's a synopsis of what this is....:

Basically what h � k � was stating here is that there is nothing like being able to showcase your originality in forms that can surpass your 'average-thinking capabilities'....as a matter of fact, the New Age Philosophy is completely wrong when it comes to comparing its 'attributes' with the simplicity of Christianity....so with that in mind, h � k � just 'flipped' their philosophy over their own heads....with their own shit....HAHAHAHAHAHA, keep it up!!!"

...Oh yeah, the line about Imhotep...listen to the song "Imhotep" by Noah23 off of the "Quicksand" LP...and you'll PROBABLY get a better understanding of h � k �....

"It was a cloudy day....I hobbled down to the beach
Too cold to swim so I salted a leech...birds caught fish
I thought it was going to rain...that's when the voice came."--Noah23

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this was nice Hex...the same high-grade piece we've come to expect from ya....just ya word usage, and structure and rhymin and the flow of your work is DEFINITELY always enough to make up for the fact that half ya shit goes over my head....which is cool in this piece..cuz we actually get the "clift notes" at the end haha......as always, enjoyable read Hex...peace! (NT) -- J£:The®ealist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 17:29:09 03/06/03 Thu

tight -- [~ZA~] TizZA, 17:38:09 03/06/03 Thu

NIce ... (NT) -- Lyrikil of G3n@$yD3, 19:14:50 03/06/03 Thu

i liked this one really nice, even tho some of the vocabulary went straight in one ear and out the other "Vanity's Shit slips off the lips of Humanity's Wit..leaving me with the moldy-leftovers of simple thoughts" that line caught my eye, i liked this very much, nice post..but i got a question..with all these metephores and Very Intesnse Vocabulary, you ever get people involved around you that doesnt understand you?...cuz i do... (NT) -- Noflow... ill look into that Noah23, 21:53:53 03/06/03 Thu

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