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Date Posted: 13:34:08 03/07/03 Fri
Author: N.a.K.I.X.e.M. aka DamienCHRIST of The Lounge of Lyricism
Author Host/IP: NoHost / 168.58.42.203
Subject: I don't know what Dark Spitter is talkin about over here...you're iller than him, atleast you don't FORCE your lines....but yo....I see potential, we all have to start somewhere....scheme was somewhat simplistic but you delivered your thoughts well....keep writin yo and bring up ideas you think no one else can conjure....peace
In reply to: Digits 's message, "Up Hill Battle" on 11:35:58 03/07/03 Fri


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  • i thought this started off strong as hell, around the level you'd expect most vets writing poetic type depressed shit to come off with...flow was pretty nice too...but about halfway through it just kinda fell off...you were just making sure the words rhymed by then...potential yes, and plenty of it, just take critiques well and keep on... (NT) -- XitiZeN, 02:09:28 03/08/03 Sat




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