A N.a.K.I.X.e.M. DIZASTERPIECE�I�m settlin down more�lots of shit been happenin so keyin and all that doesn�t fit in my agenda�so this is a keystyle to elevate my content�I choose to call this -= Incoherent Ink Coherence=-�quite abstract�I was just on some shit when I keyed this�.***ALL REPLIES AND CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM IS GREATLY APPRECIATED*** -- The Lounge Of Lyricism 2003

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Date Posted: 13:50:00 03/07/03 Fri
Author: N.a.K.I.X.e.M. aka DamienCHRIST of The Lounge of Lyricism
Author Host/IP: NoHost / 168.58.42.203
Subject: A N.a.K.I.X.e.M. DIZASTERPIECE�I�m settlin down more�lots of shit been happenin so keyin and all that doesn�t fit in my agenda�so this is a keystyle to elevate my content�I choose to call this -= Incoherent Ink Coherence=-�quite abstract�I was just on some shit when I keyed this�.***ALL REPLIES AND CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM IS GREATLY APPRECIATED***

Basic statements supported by aided maintenance,
Words walk in lines of sentences over sacred grave dens,
Scattered directions lacking matter in sections,
Connecting with no junction, only after the lessons,
Poorly aligned, predesigned for controlling the mind,
Will the completion be pulled from emptiness? Only in time,
A reflection in streams contribute to questions and dreams,
See odd figures in pools of blood, are you guessin' it's me?
As I submerge my hand, my eyes observe a man,
Trying to gain acceptance building pillars where earth can stand,
The merciless sun witnesses as his servants and sons,
Thank their Light Lord sacrificing those who lurked in it's slums,
To be properly polite, receive my honesty and might,
To prove all matter analyzed by the sun is property of light,
Is this a neutral religion? A self approval of wisdom,
To free our forsaken souls from within our glass cubicle prison,
Needing escape, not cries, when this brain clot dies,
I'll be the first to sit on humanity and watch rain drops rise....

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dident feel this at all.... fuckin short too... I know your capable of iller shit kidd.... comon with that 18 bar bullshit and come iller and show these emcees real hiphop shit... nice vocab tho... (NT) -- the dark spitter aka supreme vocab, 17:02:51 03/07/03 Fri
yo i was feeling this. well done (NT) -- mad hermit, 17:04:12 03/07/03 Fri
i was feelin this too...nice for a key...nice flow to it and good word usage..the last line i really like for some reason...just stood out to me.....overall nice piece. (NT) -- J£:The®ealist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 17:07:47 03/07/03 Fri
i was feelin this too...nice for a key...nice flow to it and good word usage..the last line i really like for some reason...just stood out to me.....overall nice piece. (NT) -- J£:The®ealist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 17:08:54 03/07/03 Fri
don't even listen to that hater dark spitter I liked your shit but your not GOD (NT) -- dlaster fuck all these fake emcees, 17:46:18 03/07/03 Fri
this was aight....what stuck out to me more than anything as how well it flowed...nice word connection..peace (NT) -- S.T.G.E. � aka "DAVID DUNN aka ILLER THAN THOU" of O.M.N.I.�, 19:37:25 03/07/03 Fri
i dunno Diz...just hit me as "decent"...flow was evidently sick as Dunn mentioned, i thought the content was 'not bad' but you really did cut back this time...why so short? you also just kinda jumbled random imagery together and gave it almost a 'forced message'...whatever Jesus, good to know you still exist...positive work... (NT) -- XitiZeN, 02:04:10 03/08/03 Sat
you know what I think about this already... (NT) -- WHYMSICKAL, 03:22:15 03/08/03 Sat
well i was definately feelin this... when people see a post from you they expect it to be outstanding everytime, this wasn't one of those but it was still ill... and i guess in a way ur still adjusting to a style change... anyway, keep em coming Diz....peace (NT) -- Versetyle, 08:55:28 03/08/03 Sat

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