lunch time key... was dissapointed at the reply from my previous post... wanted to come back and make sense this time... my bad if my lines dont make sense... -- The Lounge Of Lyricism 2003

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Date Posted: 17:26:30 03/07/03 Fri
Author: the dark spitter aka supreme vocab
Author Host/IP: kala2.k12.hi.us / 165.248.247.132
Subject: lunch time key... was dissapointed at the reply from my previous post... wanted to come back and make sense this time... my bad if my lines dont make sense...

dreams shatterd in distorted images/
life's a waste of time but I might as well finish it/
diminishin humans dieing at speeds quiker then ridlin/
the velocity travels and conqures it purpose in infinte times/
beginning my lines and leaving amatures in jail with each "/"
I mark my rhyme books with abstract intelligence leaving the viewer flamed and charred/
knifes enter baffons eyruses and shows life in seconds and how much it minuses/
life is shit when you cant make anything of your self with the time givin/
you might as well be dead and your head should be slitted/
the topics brung forth commith with no advisory nor no warining in discriptive/
fitted to be a one of kind being with a one of a person with discriptions envisioned/
most weak people cant beat the challenge and arent very timid/
understand my missions when I eject words from the mouth and spit it/
split it into seperated forms and shift it/

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u suck more than a hoe except you dont get payed for sucking bro your shit will never make sense you illiterate mother fucking bitch (NT) -- dlaster, 17:37:18 03/07/03 Fri
This was ok..pretty short...it weren't as bad as he's saying tho^^but elevation is needed (NT) -- Eternal Student, 18:26:20 03/07/03 Fri
to the first replier... shut the fuck up and drop dead or somthing... go kill your self ho... (NT) -- the dark spitter aka supreme vocab., 19:10:47 03/07/03 Fri
... actually... this is average i'd say. .. elevate dawg (oh and dlaster shouldn't talk) (NT) -- Darknodin, 22:33:44 03/07/03 Fri
this was solid. it kept my attention (NT) -- da mad hermit, 22:44:35 03/07/03 Fri
...just comes out like your trying way too hard... (NT) -- XitiZeN, 01:55:28 03/08/03 Sat

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