<font color=white>Hey this may be the first time it really don't rhyme, but hey I'm just telling my last story.. goodnight! -- The Lounge Of Lyricism 2003

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Date Posted: 19:27:13 02/24/03 Mon
Author: Warpath "The scorned soul of ELOHEIM!"
Author Host/IP: ppp-67-37-76-17.dialup.sfldmi.ameritech.net / 67.37.76.17
Subject: Hey this may be the first time it really don't rhyme, but hey I'm just telling my last story.. goodnight!

I�m in this hole lost in darkened corners of existence- were cylinders
Revolve and judge with chances of resolves, I hate this place I live
To put to waste those I rate as inadequate- with a salty taste I pull triggers
And laugh from the confusion it takes, look at her she�s so beautiful
In deaths slumber, fucking her cold facets till I feel the way she feels
The bed rumbles, spirits seem to awake I awake with blood on my
Legs, my sons sleep too and mother�s been glued, eyes wide shut,
Looking mute at her husband never wed, Gods now hates me for what
I just did, I can�t apologize the release was justified by my kid, God
I miss you Shawn now sleep rested and wait for my arms caress- blessings
Given within bullets in your mom�s chest, I�ll join you soon look for my eyes
Cause you may not be able to recognize, I�ll be the one with a hole in my
Head running screaming I�m alive, don�t be fearful nor scared I did it all
For you, you�re my only reason for living, God I miss you!

And who is she to blame me for your death?
You know I never would hurt you!
You were my son and my moon I cried when I saw you!
Few will understand this, emotional brandish
Drama like a soap-dish construed as outlandish!
My fingerprints still tremble it�s hard for me to type
I wrote you a letter in blood drunk from last night!

Damn these pills got me sleepy it�s time to say goodbye
I mean goodnight see you tomorrow if all goes right!

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WTF...be going on in your head..G.O.D...I don't know if this is a spit, a story, or a poem but I like it..One Hun'ed (NT) -- Lyrikil, 19:54:56 02/24/03 Mon
i dig ya shit fo-real loc! to explain for those illiterate asses, those bars my man jus produced are called "sicc made" a mans mind can only take so much.UNTIL HE SNAPS!!!! (NT) -- droop(tha prodicle son), 21:37:29 02/24/03 Mon
Ill shit black....I kept gettin a vivid image of each line as I kept readin, stay up (NT) -- Novakane, 16:18:30 02/25/03 Tue
I'm glad I read this......How's everything going on at home?....I know you miss your son....but you know where he is now......Keep that emotive-complex up....Still have problems with the "misses"?....Anyways, the rhyme scheme was mixed between a broken-rhyme scheme and a slant (or half) rhyme scheme...Looked very interesting though.....I guess I'm one that's aware of what's going on because of the e-mails from a couple of weeks ago.....still, keep that emotive-complex up....and stay up.... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�....You know.....the other half of Hy�-o-tHet�cal/|_ u m i n a r � � �....right?....HAHAHA..., 17:10:45 02/25/03 Tue

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