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Date Posted: 16:24:16 02/25/03 Tue
Author: Dlaster aka the Fugitive from New Zealand
Author Host/IP: NoHost / 203.163.71.118
Subject:

Some sick shit (biting is forbiden)

When it comes to freestyles I expect high tech intellect.
meanwhile the concepts content can connect,
to be delivered perfect. To infect your mind.
Make regects respect my rhymes.
Now you climb vines just to dodge these decks.
Rewind your design with combinations that are so fast
from Dlas there unable to detect.
No matter how hard you try
you couldn't redeme your self and resurrect.
Because to win is in my genetics.
Bringing a hazardous havoc thats so hectic.
Now you have no choice but to respect it.
perfected therapeutic style thats synthetic
and since I was young Iv'e been very athletic.
With an addiction to winning
first place I always have to get it.
I guess thats what makes my rhyme flow so authentic.
The message was delivered by my guardian angels
they said that god sent it.
He wants me to rap and he ment it.
Hip-hop till I die thats why I represent it.

THATS FOR REAL WHAT DO YOU THINK

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This is your boss speaking what are you doing I pay you to work not go on some half pie web sites -- SIR, 17:12:44 02/25/03 Tue
This is your boss speaking what are you doing I pay you to work not go on some half pie web sites -- SIR, 17:12:46 02/25/03 Tue
not bad. had some repetativeness to it but overall a decent post keep showing. peace one! (NT) -- starks, 17:28:55 02/25/03 Tue
This was....so-so....not knockin' your post or anything remotely related to that....I just wasn't "moved" by your use of end-rhyme with this post....I liked the post below better.....Keep up and stay up though.... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 17:32:05 02/25/03 Tue
Uhm...well...I flowed this to a beat and it actually sounds good. The only thing though is that you called yourself "synthetic"....filler word I guess cuz in your title you said "bitin is forbidden"....then you came back and said you rhyme "authentic" ...I mean pick one already. Other than that..I like this post, just need to branch a bit on word selection....keep postin yo...Peace (NT) -- Flymizess * 1st Lady of O.M.N.I. -- The Accent of Tundra and Camelions', 18:50:11 02/25/03 Tue
The flow was there but I didn't like the way u connected words, i could understand if it was a true freestyle, some content was nice though keep up peace (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 20:42:53 02/25/03 Tue
LOL i think that youre not as ill as you think.. (NT) -- ===||Swords--->, 02:55:13 02/26/03 Wed
that was ok... but uhmm... you've got some anger in you (this is about your replies)... you need professional help guy... (NT) -- Darknodin is Comin, 10:09:39 02/26/03 Wed

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