Got done slamning a 40 yall feels good, but all is not good, heres a quick keystyle for yall. PEACE -- The Lounge Of Lyricism 2003

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Date Posted: 23:21:19 02/08/03 Sat
Author: Pat D.A.W.G
Author Host/IP: host-209-214-170-47.sdf.bellsouth.net / 209.214.170.47
Subject: Got done slamning a 40 yall feels good, but all is not good, heres a quick keystyle for yall. PEACE

Cutthroat venemous is you strong or ignorant delicate/
shatter you after 4 brews serve you with the detrimant.
To ya health back burner is where I launch you/
catapault throwing rhymes like rocks cus I have to.
stop the next cat coming up ta bat and get beaned/
intertwined or mass confusion peep the sceen/
three ring circus wit no purpose let me intervene.
Plant my feet like plants grow roots channel out/
this is what its all about emcees smell like daed trout.
Misrepresent so i carve my name in ya chest wit hot pens/
top ten catch a slug from rhyme skills make a back bend.
Putn matter to track got mad rhymes like the black cat wit a top hat/
they cant top that or stop that bring a hard so I dont destroy ya brainrack.
John Does catch ill flows when I spit acidic text/
if one goes who will be next ta feel breaks in they necks.
My season emcees pleading not ta get they lifes snatched/
say what u like but understand I brew an ill batch.
Losing all hope rope a dope lyricals get smashed like cheap cunts/
verbals is a big hitter but others just get hrough cus they bunt.
Feeling semi drunk me and the x bitch might go out ta dinner on valentines/
qucik rhyme wit no thought staring at ink blots all the shit in life think I wanna cry.

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I can tell you drunken on this.. cause it sounds tight.. and I'm drunk as hell as well! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 03:41:00 02/09/03 Sun
kinda short dawg but, in the lines was good wordplay. (NT) -- nemisis, 04:58:37 02/09/03 Sun
yo this was cool...........i know i always write better when i'm high hahaha....good lyrical show here...smooth flow to it...wordplay was definitely nice here...and liked ya word usage...multi's helped set it off too...overall this was tight...keep up, peace! (NT) -- J£:The®ealist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 05:41:56 02/09/03 Sun
mad props yo....ya flow is definitly fresh...i give u mad coo points.. -- jay, 23:09:23 02/09/03 Sun
not bad son (NT) -- treyz-wan fka novice, 22:55:41 02/10/03 Mon

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