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Date Posted: 19:35:05 02/01/03 Sat
Author: isie
Author Host/IP: ca-dstreet-cuda3-c9a-135.snbrca.adelphia.net / 68.169.154.135
Subject: Lyrical Diplomacy

Lyrical Diplomacy-
by: iSie (iabolanos@hotmail.com)

everything that we hear and let go to our ears...
our mind stores it as good or interprets as fear...
because a man's worst fear is to lose his career...
lose his dear wife and kids and cry a river of tears...
but the human mind--it's so apt to remember...
it still wont let us forget that horrible September...
when lives were lost at no probible cause...
Afghanis and Iraqis were left laughing at what once was...
what once was the glory and pride of this country...
two twin towers that really said something...
now we have ruble, memories, and basically nothing...
"Sadam and Osama why the hell are you fronting?"
In our world it's all so political, the situation is critical...
when we see a criminal like Hussein and don't take him literal...
the actions--they're pitiful, more or less hypocritical...
we have a president who wants to bomb Iraq leaving nothing but minerals...
and we swear all day long, and speak with aplomb, swearing that the only solution is to drop more bombs...
But don't get me wrong--of course i think the man is bad...
i jsut keep wondering if war is the only solution we have...
Of course it's a shame how we are so prompt to blame...
the Iraqis for having weapons of mass destruction--the story is the same...
but Bush, right here, is playing his same game trying to get some fame...
what country is next--North Korea or Ukraine?
Then the U.S. gets mad at the U.N. when asks for "more time to inspect..."
because it didn't go with the plan and detect...
the so called weapons Saddam is hiding under his bed...
while i write this thread, i don't have a tear to shed...
just a bunch of memories and ideas from the top of my head...
enough said, all i see is blood--it's so red...
before the attacks nobody new where Afghanstan was...
now you see a guy in a turban and start run...
"Oh my goodnes look it's Osama, run! You best watch out man, he might have a gun..."
"Or a bomb in his shoe, you best not mess with him, he'll shoot you too and bring his Al Quida crew!"...
I would have thought you knew that things ain't determined by hue...
but wat's new-- the real number is few...
so what do we do now to save the human race?
Start a nuclear war and turn the earth into toxic waste?
No, we can't, but the question remains...
"How in the world do we get rid of the pain?"
Get rid of the pain, the infamous stain, left in our brains, after we saw to planes...
crash into the world trade and ignite a new strain...
a new burden and reality that has the U.S. up into insanity...
i think it's best that we all switch mentalities...
change personalities and start new philsophy...
with lack of formality back with constant profanity...
never ever wanting to return to reality...
call it insanity, i prefer calamity...
oops, my bad, i'm regaining my sanity (woo)...

this is a little something i wrote after watching the news and the situation the U.S. is in...hit me back with feedback...

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hmm... intrestin, im a lil sicc of readin posts like this.. but wuteva, it was iigh i guess... i wasnt feelin the beginin at all, bout 16 bars later it got a lil better.. iono, guess i was expectin a lil more.. i felt you could put more into this an made it more intrestin.. or for that matter, kept my intrest.. (NT) -- ��mz. m�j��麺�, 23:37:42 02/01/03 Sat
i liked this rhyme, it brought back memories but i dont like being reminded about it though, good spit. (NT) -- nemisis, 07:50:06 02/02/03 Sun
this was ok.....you stayed on topic and had some good lines in there....some were a bit simplistic but its coo tho......pEaCe (NT) -- Eternal Student (UK), 14:52:12 02/02/03 Sun
I'am not real patriotic but I really digged the passion and emotion you seemed ta compose this with nice post PEACE (NT) -- PAt D.A.W.G, 16:02:16 02/02/03 Sun
this was cool,lloonnnggg not hardcore like I like the messag was felt (NT) -- CMOPAIN, 17:09:02 02/02/03 Sun
i feel this cuz i write real shit like this... daym almost most the same (NT) -- GoNzO, 18:14:04 02/02/03 Sun
peeped when u first posted and i promised myself i'd read da whole thing later...well i did...thought this was cool...nothing that took my breath away but it was cool for what it was...thought da line about the two planes was dope...keep droppin shyt yo and stay up...peez (NT) (NT) -- DiAtRiBe, 05:30:44 02/03/03 Mon

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