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Date Posted: 20:36:59 02/03/03 Mon
Author: the fish
Author Host/IP: 245-160.sfcc.edu / 150.176.245.160
Subject: just messin

looked in the mirror and saw nothin but a blank stare,
then looked into my heart and realized that there aint shit there,
gotta blow my nose cus this white shit's got me life less,
but im feinin for this shit so there aint no use tryin to fight it,
wonderin where the fuck god went every time i got bent,
dont give a fuck about fuck, i got death on the subconscious,
layin on my back, veins bulgin, with my fist clinched,
gotta sixth sense tellin me that i should end this,
end what? what the fuck? cant listen no more,
ego got me trippin, so i'll go grab my fifth, naw my four,
filled the clip to the tip, then put that shit my temple,
cuz i gotta stop this nonsense, and ima keep it simple,
and when i go unconscious, let the man clean me up,
cuz ima be somewhere happy if son brings me up,

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this seemed kind of poetic to me... none the less, this was iigh for what was there... cant really expect to get a real crit off somthin this short... (NT) -- ��mz. m�j��麺�, 20:47:27 02/03/03 Mon
Man get some help if ya really suicidal and spend some time in the lab sorting shit out there is sunrise and a next day everyday son PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 21:01:42 02/03/03 Mon
yea i can see the poetic feel to it...it was aight.....played out subject for reals...but ya didn't come completely wack wit it...i can tell ya got at least some talent...just learn to focus it...find different things to write about.....stay up, peace! (NT) -- J£:The®ealist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 00:51:34 02/04/03 Tue
fuk what niggaz sayin,...critique everything......ha....i liked, felt it....u got something dawg...just one question...u really feel this way, i mean u do coke, and think about death like this?....if so.....weep a lil, cry aloud, shake yo arms, but dont pay fo tha farm....lay down tha arms, pray and lay out yo arms, heres a blessin (NT) -- styliztik....aka...quote, 02:26:03 02/04/03 Tue
damn...try some Robitussin..shyt makes ya fuzzy inside..(NT) (NT) -- DiAtRiBe, 07:00:56 02/04/03 Tue
Where are you all looking? WTF ? ...Is there a hidden link i don't know about...where's the poetic stuff...this kid said "I don't give a fuck about fuck" !?!?!...this was total ass, get the fuck outa here 'poetic' lol (he's not the only one snortin') haha (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 10:17:58 02/04/03 Tue
Me and my Boy made this comic, it's happens to have a fish in it so I couldn't take a fish in a bowl with white residue flaking-up on his upper-lip serious.. I just started laughing.. pretty good flow though.. The Fish..lmao I use to talk about fish-bitches and crab-cakes and tad-pole heads.. it's just funny my bad.. change you name in jail you would be somebodies bitch.. "fish, fish, fish, fish!" "my highs wearing off.." from Half baked.. lmao! peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 12:03:03 02/04/03 Tue

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