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Date Posted: 21:01:06 02/03/03 Mon
Author: ºººmz. mîjå¬þø麺º
Author Host/IP: netcache-2003.public.lawson.webtv.net / 209.240.198.62
Subject: iigh, i replied to 3 posts.. so this shouldnt get deleted, i've posted here a while bacc.. its been a while since the last time i dropped anything... but heres one of my attempts at this story line shit... "Gauntlets of a King" ... peep an give honest crits... all feedbacc is much appreciated

Black rings encircle eye sockets, enlarged pupil dilates and rage births from bloodshot retinal scans
War wounds bleed tremendous..sharp edged intellect, innocently released text by Seminole hands
Shit-creek was too full as weaker emcees swim, but I alone trudge whitewash with an incredible stance
My teflon suit equipped..combat armor superior, iron lungs exhale death through indelible glands
A savage 'man', rock hard epidermis..primed to burrow through rockslides vista viewed an avalanche
Left hand bladed, unsheathed the terror, slicing astral plains sketching a dead scene amidst the catacombs
Right hand pulls the pin..released napalm grenade, only to watch the aftershock tear and rattle bones
Endowed with the quickest of speed, enabling lightning strike movements to anticipate and slam the drones
Cunning and agile against oppressors..swallowed my own shadow, enveloped to be cloaked in darkness
Zombies attack with naive intentions, no human remorse for the damned; knuckles concave all hearts in
Tombstones are the last memoirs standing vigil, sailed corpses to Purgatory in sin for taking part in
An inevitable destruction, revealing wings of the Archangel take flight on a mission to burn and char skin
Beads of sweat fall down my brow..my archetype deigned both knees as a stench of Death sweeps the field
Vermin scurry round with aggression, parasitic to the hub, effortlessly tring to breach and defeat the shield
Parried counterstrikes with infallible wit..carbon copied the epitome, doomed to change or reap the 'skills'
Used spoken word as a main artery, piloted independence via seesaws escalating to leap or precede the tilts
Breathed in the silt, ash, and ember from the tainted surface..exhaled despair and chuckled a grim laughter
Armageddon has ceased as an era of new proportions arises as I alone forge and muscle the grim chapters

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