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Date Posted: 06:32:49 02/04/03 Tue
Author: DiAtRiBe
Author Host/IP: adsl-76-136-223.mia.bellsouth.net / 216.76.136.223
Subject: damn...deep shyt man...alot of ill lines.."it's like i'm reachin for stars,but they're too far, and it's just too hard, to grab ahold of the heavens wit human arms"....dope....good shyt for me to start da day with..makes me wanna post..stay up yo...(NT)
In reply to: J£:The®ealist of Κa†a¢lÿzm 's message, "New Post!!!.....a lil piece i'm workin on entitled..."Reachin"...just lookin for some feedback and critique....oooh, and this isn't long like usual hahaha....ENJOY!!!!" on 01:04:00 02/04/03 Tue

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  • the "human arms.." part was my favourite too, flow was on point and the word usage is expanding nicely...I liked the deepness of this most of all. Nice drop, Peace sonn (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 09:53:06 02/04/03 Tue




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