PRE-WRITTEN....not near my best...but it was just what came out as i wrote....i been on this tip lately -- The Lounge Of Lyricism 2003

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Date Posted: 14:36:00 02/04/03 Tue
Author: Vision...Thrice Optics of Abzent Minded w/ OMNI
Author Host/IP: wylle069.uwp.edu / 131.210.106.69
Subject: PRE-WRITTEN....not near my best...but it was just what came out as i wrote....i been on this tip lately

"Life flows to death as rivers to sea"
a fleet of lives in route to an abrupt sleep
we know one day it'll happen this heinous action
to pass judgement on this lone passion
called life, it was given and it'll be taken away
so quick it'd be like as if it was end of the day
the omega to a quest best said as a journey
i came to this world alone why would anyone mourn me?
this final destination leads to a fork in the road
can i boast to go the right way or behold
hades, the darkness and fire maybe, hate thee
or not its not really my thing to plot another
or wish death cause in the end you'll still be my brother
whether i went to one place and you went to the other
we'll always be flesh and blood of another mother

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this gave me the thought of six degress of seperation...seemed kinda what you were getting at..i unno.. it was dope though...flow was coo, and the content was nice...nice to see ya dropping some text.....stay up Vis....peace (NT) -- Essence....Abzent Minded, 14:56:45 02/04/03 Tue
Kinda short but content was nice, I see possabilities if it was longer PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 16:08:48 02/04/03 Tue
Yeah, it was short.....But sometimes, you have to realize that your BEST ideas come out when you just let your mind take over your fingertips and type....This is an example of that...Keep this up and stay up.... (NT) -- h Ł k §/|_ A \/Š...., 17:38:34 02/04/03 Tue
Although it was brief, the content really spoke to me. Keep doin what you doin (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 19:43:14 02/04/03 Tue
damn man this was short as Human mis-conception of time.. but I liked it. (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 22:03:54 02/04/03 Tue

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