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Date Posted: 16:06:40 02/04/03 Tue
Author: ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm
Author Host/IP: hlfx42-194.ns.sympatico.ca / 142.177.92.194
Subject: 20 bars that I wrote this morning

On Bass lines I'm smooth like Abdur-Rahim's spin move
Or RS grooves that boom on Sunday afternoons
You nicer than who? Obviously you misconstrued
Unless your name is Jesus Christ and had your life twice removed
I intice the fools, re-write the rules, Ignite the fuels
I'm nice wit tools, Invite the duels, Dicipher clues
My advice to you choose between the bright red or blue
I'm an explosive livewire so you might just diffuse
My life and It's views which I use to address the public
Cause I don't just drop bombs I embody the essence of it
Bare witness as I exhibit the most prolific yet discovered
it's in my bloodwork like ties I share with my brother
My design open your mind like a fine crafted cupboard
Wouldn't repeat a line if I tttttttried to studder
I'll make an earthquake shudder and utter it ain't my fault
Subterranian status take it with a grain of salt
With a tectonic tongue I lick dust from the earth's crust
So if you find your self shaking It ain't cause you nerv-ous
I got sur-plus for every inch a worm thrusts
Bring the pain like a nappy head givin a firm brush

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haha..this was dope Brail...i really enjoy your posts..you got a nice style, and flow is impecable...keep dropping brotha...stay up...peace~ (NT) -- Essence...........AM, 16:10:48 02/04/03 Tue
Nice bars brail, the last lines were funny about nappy heads and hairbrushes. Not used ta seeing ya post short but still dope content like the rest of them> PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 16:13:14 02/04/03 Tue
iight...thiz was......str8 (NT) -- SickNen, 16:20:26 02/04/03 Tue
cool little flow. keep em comin. always a pleasure. one (NT) -- starks, 17:02:02 02/04/03 Tue
Good writing......keep up with the multisyllables....it'll help you grow into polysyllabic real quick....Keep this up and stay up.... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 17:23:12 02/04/03 Tue
Man.....this was heat.....some of tha lines were pretty vivid and tha flow was smooth......nice work.....PeAcE (NT) -- Eternal Student (UK), 17:53:40 02/04/03 Tue
dope flow man.. real smooth... audio? (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 21:08:56 02/04/03 Tue
I'm jealous. That had to be fun to write. Keep it up. (NT) -- Blueprint, 21:27:15 02/04/03 Tue

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