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Date Posted: 12:24:26 01/25/03 Sat
Author: Watt$on formerly from Vocab's Official
Author Host/IP: ARA-WIBBENMEYRC.olin.wustl.edu / 128.252.80.91
Subject: What is the Problem?

my mass reached critical/
before they detached the umbilical/
whimsical visages dropped through subliminal images/
it's obvious I'm cynical/
win or lose I'm livin this/
bruise crews and watch black hedz ooze like syphilis/
fuck the mic I'm grippin it/
I spit intricate/
syntax attackin with limited range of patterns/
delivered in a lazy manner/
never to blazed to spatter and spit/
more elaborate than the average kid/
but I am enamored by emcees who be packin the clips and/
droppin shit so hot that you back out of the kitchen/
I stay wishin/
cuz I can gain the bait to switch em/
so they'll leave the store with more than just the way I ripped em/
I'm watchin you slippin/
the object of my affliction/
is I'm too dope to get, but I'm too broke to get some/
so I pray to the kick drum/
snare my frustrations/
waitin for the day my shit airs on the station/
so take care and be patient/
...take care and be patient//

hook:
x 2

who's at the top?
where is the top?
when do we drop?
why can't we stop?
what is our option?

who's at the top?
where can we drop?
when do we drop?
why can't we stop?
what is the problem?

enjoy!
peace,
Watt$

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Replies:

it started nice but then ya lost me...some of the lines were eh? ..hooks are wack in text but the flow was cool...keep on (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 12:34:51 01/25/03 Sat
its good......But i dont know.. its missing something (NT) -- Tactics, 12:46:46 01/25/03 Sat
could have done without the chorus, wasnt pullin nothin... expecially in text. anyways, this was alright.. some shit i didnt know why you added it, but overall it was iigh.. nothin eye catchin.. keep elevatin (NT) -- ��mz. m�J�p�麺, 13:31:41 01/25/03 Sat
um the host is mean.... this flow was aiight im cant say anything cuz um im not good as other niggas/./.. -- GONZo, 14:06:46 01/25/03 Sat
scratch the hook......verse was straight....pretty decent flow and vocab here and there....yo you posted on da underground huh? you should bring more of them cats here (NT) -- Vision, 17:16:18 01/25/03 Sat
i actully like the beginning and then you fizzled out. but overall a proper post........lose the chorus. (NT) -- starks, 12:09:39 01/26/03 Sun
this was iight.. it started iight and kinda got worse.. but not to much.. stay up! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 19:38:07 01/27/03 Mon

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