Quick keypad...Might look kinda simple, but it sounds good with the beat i used -- The Lounge Of Lyricism 2003

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Date Posted: 12:27:25 01/25/03 Sat
Author: Tactics
Author Host/IP: 12-233-163-148.client.attbi.com / 12.233.163.148
Subject: Quick keypad...Might look kinda simple, but it sounds good with the beat i used

Im the one and only/you don’t got what it takes
To dethrone me,
The closest person to my level was that weak
Nigga befoe me
Tearin fools up like files and im the Enron
Employees,
Torturing and Murdering niggas on the Mic like
God told me
Threes only a couple things I like more than smoking
With my homies,
And ones being with a female moaning/Iey Pappi
Im so houney
I might brag about my rapping but the bitches do
The sex boastin,
(female) “Tactic is like a cold glass of coke he feels good
going down….on me”
And niggas say Tactics got as many flavas as
Sobe,
Being on top is great but lonely/and im sick of all
The nose bleeds
All this time on top got my body
Mutated,
My tongue is now strong as a snake’s is/can take any verse
And In one bar can say it
Bitch! I am the Matrix/ just lot more
Complicated,
With a CPU language/that got Bill gates stunned that he
Cant understand it
California’s own tournedoe suckin in all universe’s stars
And planets,
Quick to digest it and start shitin on you Science,
History, and Mathematics
I take shots of tequila in 711 size
Glasses,
That burn aint nothing when you can spit lyrics and they
Come out your mouth ashes

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Replies:

uhm...you need to progress some kid, this was weak, look at some other posts and you'll see what I mean. It looks 'simple' because it is...just elevate your thoughts and you'll find your style..keep writing! Peace (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 12:42:20 01/25/03 Sat
for a key i didnt expect much commin into this, so i cant say that im too supprised... flow was just real simple, mother goose type shit... work on your vocab, everything else will follow (NT) -- ººmz. mîJå¬pØéºº, 13:27:50 01/25/03 Sat
NAH MEAN I DIDN't NAH WHAT U MEAN NAH MEAN (NT) -- GONZO, 14:04:23 01/25/03 Sat
yo' it's definitly not the greatest rhyme scheme you got going but it wasn't that bad. simple but i could see it spit over a beat and possibly being allright (NT) -- starks, 12:01:25 01/26/03 Sun
just nothing with worth.. iight at best, keep writing man.. peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 19:35:51 01/27/03 Mon

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