dont matter if you white....should have learned that by now, but you still need to learn to rhyme...like you went from "feel me" to "best mc' to 'stop me' to 'corny' to 'ignore me'....see that all woulda been cool if you left that line with stop me out or switched the words stop me with something that rhymed, cause then that messed ya flow up...try not to sound so.....uhh......'angry', that only works for a few people, be yaself and spit -- The Lounge Of Lyricism 2003

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Date Posted: 16:10:56 01/27/03 Mon
Author: Vision
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Subject: dont matter if you white....should have learned that by now, but you still need to learn to rhyme...like you went from "feel me" to "best mc' to 'stop me' to 'corny' to 'ignore me'....see that all woulda been cool if you left that line with stop me out or switched the words stop me with something that rhymed, cause then that messed ya flow up...try not to sound so.....uhh......'angry', that only works for a few people, be yaself and spit
In reply to: rusty 's message, "my second spit(i dont give a shit)" on 14:38:18 01/27/03 Mon

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um iight.. I was not really feeling this.. just sounded like you was .. well I dont know.. I just aint feel it.. keep writing though, peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 18:22:50 01/27/03 Mon

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