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Date Posted: 11:46:32 02/01/03 Sat
Author: ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm
Author Host/IP: lah-m708-mac26.tees.ac.uk / 152.105.146.187
Subject: The content in the second part is nice with some good vocab and usage, although I couldn't catch the flow of the first verse at all and some lines just didn't ryhme in both parts...I wasn't feeling meter here...The "iris.." line was ill, Peace
In reply to: FLaTLyNe 's message, " Backwards..." on 09:49:24 02/01/03 Sat

Your Cypher spit was a lot nicer...

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  • You know exactly what you're doing when it comes to lyricism....I always enjoy your posts....even though the "length" in your bars (from my perspective) seems a little infantine, at times......other than that, keep this up and stay up.... (NT) -- h £ k §/|_ A \/©...., 13:42:37 02/01/03 Sat




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