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Date Posted: 13:37:25 03/12/03 Wed
Author: INS
Author Host/IP: NoHost / 67.105.153.130
Subject: good i like it, it was raw, not as unreal as alot of posts
In reply to: chromenine 's message, "Gotz some crazy shi, wrote it while i had a headache.... peep and critique i think its a little unstreight but also the flow ainīt easy to figure out sometimes" on 05:35:27 03/12/03 Wed

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  • This was aiight...work on rhyming words..content and your word usage...some words just didn't fit (NT) -- Lyrikil, 14:56:03 03/12/03 Wed


  • I ainīt tryn to holla at u, and i can understand yo point, but wait for the audio post of this, and THEN tell me what didnīt rhyme. No hate, No front, as i said donīt take this wrong. Iīm not trying to degrade your critique.... (NT) -- chromenine@gmx.net, 03:56:19 03/13/03 Thu



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