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Date Posted: 19:46:14 03/12/03 Wed
Author: Psilocybe
Author Host/IP: user99.net335.fl.sprint-hsd.net / 65.40.20.99
Subject: I think its alright. Its starts out good and ends good, it just needs some work in the middle. It also could be a little longer
In reply to: Dlaster 's message, "peep and criticize" on 17:52:28 03/12/03 Wed


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  • Wasn't really feelin this. All I can say is keep writing and you will see improvment (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 21:31:37 03/12/03 Wed


  • Wheres your post man are you voting (NT) -- dlaster, 21:45:14 03/12/03 Wed



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