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Date Posted: 17:24:04 03/13/03 Thu
Author: Vision...Thrice Optics
Author Host/IP: cache-mtc-ah04.proxy.aol.com / 64.12.96.169
Subject: thiw was extremely long....i did catch th flow better, good job putting it in bars this time...flow was still a little bit choppy...even ya bars a little
In reply to: Cu-jo 's message, "Big Brother (revised in bar format)" on 15:18:04 03/13/03 Thu


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  • this was hella long, but its cool man...i could tell that this was straight from your heart, there was emotion pouring out of your words man, this was a very nice way of putting your emotions out man, like Vision said flow was a lil choppy but i dont think you really went for flow in this one...stay up and building peace (NT) -- MC RHYMES a.k.a. SOUL COLLECTOR "you know the crew", 00:31:42 03/14/03 Fri


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